I can see from watching it that you have got potential but you should definatley channel it into some other sort of movie with at least a storyline. Oh and the music and text is offensive. This should definatley be rated as a 15+ including all of the awful pictures. it is also midly offensive but as I said I think you have got potential so just use to make something better.
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